Please read my literary essay. All the artwork was created by me. I would also like feedback on my work. Please leave comments below by clicking on the “add a comment” section.
Please read my literary essay. All the artwork was created by me. I would also like feedback on my work. Please leave comments below by clicking on the “add a comment” section.
Lisa’s Class Room 2-408
Never try to be mean to your brother or sister. If he/she annoys you or is mean, don’t do it back because you know that he/she loves you a lot. In I’ll Fix Anthony, by Judith Viorst, it reminds me of my little brother Lorent because he annoys me a lot. I tell him to “STOP!” and then he stops. He is scared that if he doesn’t stop, I’ll hit him. He looks at me and he says, “I’m sorry!” and I say, “It’s OK.” Then he says, “Can we play a game?”
The main character’s brother is not letting him use his toy sword and told him, “You stink!” And then he feels so sad. I would never do that to my little brother. Then the main character wants to get revenge on his big brother Anthony. And he says a dog will follow him home. He says that the dog will bite Anthony on the butt. The main character says, “When I’m six I’ll fix Anthony,” but when he is six that will never happen. He will never be bigger than his older brother. Never try to hit or hurt your brother because it will hurt him and he will cry.
Monday, February 14, 2011
Alfred Hoti
I’ll Fix Anthony, by Judith Viorst